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Reduce traffic congestion

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Traffic jams are becoming more of a concern in many cities throughout the world because of their negative results on numerous parts of life. Subsequently, traffic congestion ought to be alleviated by distinctive strategies. Public transportation is indeed one way to diminish traffic congestion because it is a form of transport with transport capacity, capable of serving the majority of urban people with low travel costs. . . In that way, it removes motorbikes, cars from the roads and instead provides more efficient means of transportation. For example, for our country, the use of public transport has also increased sharply in recent years. Especially the appearance of the Cat Linh - Ha Dong railway line, will partly help reduce the current traffic congestion rate. Apart from that, with the growing congestion on our roads, this problem will only get worse if we do not invest in intelligent transport systems. Intelligent transport system provides regular information to passengers daily about public transport, time, seat, the current location of the vehicle, time to reach a particular destination, next location of other means. It can avoid congestion by taking alternative routes or rescheduling trips. For example, in the UK, ITS data seems to be well distributed and accessible to the public, so traffic congestion is significantly reduced. In brief, traffic congestion will not be an enormous issue if those solutions are executed.
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capacity, capable of serving the majority of urban
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people
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rate. Apart from that, with the growing
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worse if we do not invest in intelligent
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systems. Intelligent
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system provides regular information to passengers daily about
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, time, seat, the
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location of the vehicle, time to reach a particular destination,
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location of other means. It can avoid
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congestion
by taking alternative routes or rescheduling trips.
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will not be an enormous issue if those solutions
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