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The diagram illustrates various steps in which electricity is generated using geothermal energy.

The diagram illustrates various steps in which electricity is generated using geothermal energy. 7W7X5
The following picture provides information about the phases of producing electrical energy. Generally speaking, the procedure is in 5 sections and requires lots of advanced equipment. Initially, a huge tank contains an abundance of cold water is needed to start the process. Then those liquids will go through a long pipe around 4. 5km underground until hitting the geothermal zone which is a thick layer of hot rocks to heat the water naturally. To the next level, these hot liquid will be pumped up to the ground and meet a condenser which use the heat to condense it to become hot air. Then this air is moved to an enormous turbine to create power for the generator to manufacture electricity. Finally, these kinds of power will be delivered via high tension poles as a way to help the massive population get access to better living conditions.
The following picture provides information about the phases of producing electrical energy.

Generally
speaking, the procedure is in 5 sections and requires lots of advanced equipment.
Initially
, a huge tank contains an abundance of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
water
is needed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the process. Then those liquids will go through a long pipe around 4.
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "5 km"
5km
underground until hitting the geothermal zone which is a thick layer of hot rocks to heat the water
naturally
. To the
next
level, these hot liquid will
be pumped
up to the ground and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
a condenser which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the heat to condense it to become hot air. Then this air is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to an enormous turbine to create power for the generator to manufacture electricity.
Finally
, these kinds of power will
be delivered
via high tension poles as a way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the massive population
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
access to better living conditions.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates various steps in which electricity is generated using geothermal energy.

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146 words
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