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Question : maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.

Question: maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. 56O5D
Introduction: The three pictures represent modifications in the country side of Meadowside and the suburb of Fonton between 1962 and present. Overall it can be seen that, both places had large growth and development of buildings and facilities over the period as well as both areas have joined into one large area. B1 In 1960, both towns were separated from each other. Meadowside had a road running through from the southwest to northeast whereas Fonton had a rail Passing throughfrom southeast to northwest. B2 By 1985 both areas had expanded significantly. There was a new road which connect the village Meadowside and Fonton while the old road had been made bigger. In meadowside, ahousing estate, a leisure centre and super store were being built next to the road. B3 Currently, Meadowside and fonton have joined and empty area has a business park, hotel and railway station
Introduction: The three pictures represent modifications in the country side of
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Meadowside
and the suburb of
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Fonton
between 1962 and present.

Overall
it can be
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seen
that, both places had large growth and development of buildings and facilities over the period
as well
as both areas have
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joined
into one large area.

B1 In 1960, both towns
were separated
from each other.
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Meadowside
had a road running through from the southwest to northeast whereas
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Fonton
had a
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rail


Passing
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throughfrom
southeast to northwest.

B2 By 1985 both areas had expanded
significantly
. There was a new road which connect the village
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Meadowside
and
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Fonton
while the
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old
road had
been made
bigger. In
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meadowside
,
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ahousing
estate, a leisure
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centre
and super store were
being built
next
to the road.

B3
Currently
,
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Meadowside


and
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fonton
have
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joined
and empty area has a business park, hotel and railway station

IELTS academic Question: maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.

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7 paragraphs
145 words
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