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production and consumption of energy in USA from 1905 to 2013. It also predicts figure to 2025

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The line graph depicts the production and consumption of in energy in America in between 1950 to 2013. This graph also illustrates forecast the trend until 2025. Overall, we can see that consumption rate is higher compared to the production of energy. At the begging of the period, the manufacture and utilization rate of energy was at 25units. Afterward, rate was increased by more than 50 units in 25 years of period. The consumption and production was rose simultaneously until for 1975. After that, the consumption unit was in upward direction, whereas production was levelled off. From 2017 to 2025, the trend represents that consumption rate is estimated to be at peak, which will account nearly 150 unit. In contrasts, production rises very slow motion and it will reahes to just aboe 75 units in 2025.
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IELTS academic production and consumption of energy in USA from 1905 to 2013. It also predicts figure to 2025

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