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process shows how olive oil is made

process shows how olive oil is made 65m0

The diagram shows the process by which olive oil make. It can be seen that in the process many steps are taken to prepare olive oil. The first, ripe olives are picked from olive trees and they are rinsing throughly in cold water. The second, the washed olive grains are passed through a belting equipment. In the next step, the peeled olive grains that have passed over the moving equipment are smashing. A further, crushed olives are divided into two, namely olive paste and olive stone. Eventually, they are placed in a bag with holes. This step involves the placed products are sent to the pressing and pressed. After this stage is complete, the pressed product is sent to the separation equipment, where it is divided into two, one for oil and one of water. Finally, the products are shipped for storage and sale.

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shows
 the process by which olive oil This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
.

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seen
 that in the process This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 steps are taken
 to prepare olive oil.

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, ripe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are picked
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trees and
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throughly
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water. The second, the washed olive grains are passed
 through a belting equipment. In the next
 step, the peeled olive grains that have passed over the moving equipment are smashing. A further
, crushed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are divided
 into two, namely
 olive paste and olive stone. Eventually
, they are placed
 in a bag with holes. This step involves the placed products are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the pressing and pressed. After this stage is complete, the pressed product is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the separation equipment, where it is divided
 into two, one for oil and one of water. Finally
, the products are shipped
 for storage and sale. 