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A large amount of electricity is needed to supply electric energy in houses, so nowadays, in many countries, solar PV panels are used. This diagram shows how the process works. First of all, the solar PV panel is fixed to the roof of the house and connected to the battery stores electricity. Then, during the day, the Sun heats the solar PV panel and the solar PV panel generates electricity. When the electricity is generated, it is stored in the battery. Next, the Inverter converts power for use in the house. Finally, the house is supplied with electricity by the solar PV panel. Overall, it’s a cheap and efficient way to supply power.
A large amount of
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electricity
is needed
to supply electric energy in
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houses
,
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so
nowadays, in
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countries,
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solar
PV
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panels
are
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used
. This diagram
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shows
how the process works.
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First of all
, the
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solar
PV
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panel
is
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fixed
to the roof of the
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house
and connected to the battery stores
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electricity
. Then, during the day, the Sun heats the
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solar
PV
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panel
and the
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solar
PV
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panel
generates
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electricity
. When the
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electricity
is generated
, it
is stored
in the battery.
Next
, the Inverter converts power for
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use
in the
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house
.
Finally
, the
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house
is supplied
with
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electricity
by the
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solar
PV
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panel
.
Overall
, it’s a
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cheap
and efficient way to supply power.
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IELTS academic process of solar PV panel

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113 words
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