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look at the stages in a diagram for using solar energy to produce electricity

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In our modern world. among many people popular to use solar PV panels to protect the environment. The given pictures illustrate producing electricity with using solar energy. Solar PV panel generates sun heat to electricity. The formed electricity will collect into battery stores. For using this electricity energy invented converts power. Finally it can used in the house. Overall, such energy is primarily cheap and can help reduce environmental pollutions
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solar PV panels to protect the environment.

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. The formed
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will collect into battery stores. For using this
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energy invented converts power.
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IELTS academic look at the stages in a diagram for using solar energy to produce electricity

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2 paragraphs
69 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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