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information about main subjects students studying in 2010 at a US university.

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The bar chart illustrades us information about main subjects (marketing, accounting, finance, economics, engeenering and mathematics ) students studying in 2010 at a US university. It can be clearly seen males chosed mathematics ( 200 ) and economics ( 150 ) more, but females chosed marketing ( high of 100 ) and accounting ( 200 ). It is interesting finance subject is the same both of gender ( between 200 and 250 ). Other hand males chosed 2 subjects least more than females: marketing ( through of 100 ) and accounting ( less than 200 ). A smaller number female students studying economics ( around 70-80 ) and mathematics ( neraly 60 ). Interestingly, engineering subject is at least both of. It is only around 50. It is noticeable that finance is the most subject which seleceted option. How ever engineering is the least subject studdents studying.
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students studying in 2010 at a US university.

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males
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mathematics
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200
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and economics
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more,
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females
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chosed
marketing
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high of 100
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and accounting
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200
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. It is interesting finance
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is the same both of gender
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between 200 and 250
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. Other hand males
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chosed
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than females: marketing
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through of 100
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and accounting
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less than 200
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. A smaller number female students studying economics
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around 70-80
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and mathematics
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neraly
60
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.
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, engineering
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is at least both of. It is
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around 50.

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IELTS academic information about main subjects students studying in 2010 at a US university.

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3 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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