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Graphs relationship between computer ownership and education in years 2002 to 2010.

Graphs relationship between computer ownership and education in years 2002 to 2010. MlWk9
The graphs illustrations the relationship between computer ownership and education in years 2002 to 2010. The ownership of computer slowly increase about ten precent from 2002 to 2010. In average increased two percent every two years. According to the graphs of education level. The graph basically increase by the level of the eduation. the graph shows postgraduate qualifications has the highest computer ownership, which is ninety percent in 2010 and seventy percent in 2002. Also, it has double percent of computer ownership than no high school diploma in 2010. Moreover, it has seven times more than 2002 in 2010. And the no high school diploma group increased thirty percent in eight years, which is four times from 2002 to 2010. There's the outlook of all the ownership may achieve one hundred percent in the next fivity years by 2025, which means the relationship of computer ownership by eduation level will be decreases in the future.
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illustrations the relationship between computer
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and education in years 2002 to 2010.

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of computer
slowly
increase about ten
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from 2002 to 2010. In average increased two
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every two years. According to the
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of education level. The
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basically
increase by the level of the
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eduation
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postgraduate qualifications has the highest computer
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ownership
, which is ninety
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in 2010 and seventy
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in 2002.
Also
, it has double
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percent
of computer
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ownership
than no high school diploma in 2010.
Moreover
, it has seven times more than 2002 in 2010.

And the no high school diploma group increased thirty
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percent
in eight years, which is four times from 2002 to 2010. There's the outlook of all the
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ownership
may achieve one hundred
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in the
next
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fivity
years by 2025, which means the relationship of computer
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by
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level will be decreases in the future.

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