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INTERNATIONAL TOURIST ARRIVAL IN MILLIONS

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The presented graph gives data about arrivals of international tourists to five different countries (USA, France, Malaysia, Brazil, and Egypt) over 15 years from 1995 to 2010. The units are given as millions. Overall, it is clear from the graph that, the number of international visitors to five different countries increased throughout the given period. Moreover, the USA and France were substantially higher than the rest of the countries. Firstly, in 1995, the arrival of tourists to the USA was 70 million which it then, this figure rose steadily to reach a peak at, over a decade, to a number of 90 million. Meanwhile, by 1995, there were merely 30 million travelers visiting France. However, in the following years, it experienced an upward trend to hit a peak at just well under 90 million visitors just as the USA had by the end of the year. Secondly, Malaysia had only 20 million travelers at the beginning of the year. In addition to that, there was a steady rise in the rate of visited tourist to reach a high of over 40 million in 2010. Lastly, Brazil and Egypt followed almost similar patterns throughout the entire period. The percentage of visitors rose gradually from 10 up to a high of 15 and 17 million, respectively.

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 in 2010. Lastly
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, respectively
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