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Process of building an igloo

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The diagram illustrates the process of biulding an igloo. Overall, there are 13 main steps in this process, beginning with cutting hard packed snow and endding with culminating in covering the entrance hole with snow blocks. At the first main step, hard-packed snow is cut by snow saw to form the large blocks at the base. The snow block size is 15 in height, 8 in length and 3 in width. Next, the edges of these blocks, which like cubes, are smoothed to build the base which has a round shape. At the next stage, the walls are dug to create a hole to make an entrance for the igloo and a block is slightly large for the last opening on top. At the eighth stage, snow is packed by the spade into all crevices or gaps between these blocks. Then, snow is shovelled onto the outside of the igloo and is packed into all crevices while the internal surface of the igloo is smoothed by hand. Any excess snow is also removed from the inside of the igloo. And finally, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance, and is then covered with snow blocks to complete the igloo.
The diagram illustrates the process of
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biulding
an igloo.

Overall
, there are 13 main steps in this process, beginning with cutting
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hard
packed
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snow
and
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endding
with culminating in covering the entrance hole with
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snow
blocks.

At the
first
main step,
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-packed
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snow
is
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cut
by
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snow
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saw
to form the large
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blocks
at the base. The
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snow
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block
size is 15 in height, 8 in length and 3 in width.
Next
, the edges of these
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blocks
, which like cubes,
are smoothed
to build the base which has a round shape. At the
next
stage, the walls
are dug
to create a hole to
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make
an entrance for the igloo and a
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block
is
slightly
large for the last opening on top. At the eighth stage,
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snow
is packed
by the spade into all crevices or gaps between these blocks.

Then,
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snow
is
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shovelled
onto the outside of the igloo and
is packed
into all crevices while the internal surface of the igloo
is smoothed
by hand. Any excess
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snow
is
also
removed from the inside of the igloo. And
finally
, a hole
is dug
in the shape of the entrance, and is then covered with
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snow
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blocks
to complete the igloo.
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IELTS academic Process of building an igloo

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  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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