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The diagram shows selected types of TV programmes viewed by sex in Ne world Cambridge in 2017/2018.

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The given diagram illustrates selected sorts of TV programmes seen by sex during this period 2017 or 2018. The core information would be underlined below by selecting the main features in a chronological manner. It is apparent that, the man and women are both seeing the news the 2017 or 2018 which has on the average the amount of 72% and 65%. Moreover, comedy films both have seen men and women through the 2017 and 2018. Albeit men had seen tv programmes highest rather than women. Furthermore, most of the people seen live sport coverage and women have seen too less about the quality of 80% and 40%. However, women was viewing soaps which was highest the projection of 66% rather than men. In addition, food and cookery was increasing by women, not men. More precisely, quiz shows are viewing to similar the segment with exclusively 30%. conversely, current affairs or politics has most seen by men and some women has seen which was approximately the amount of 22% and 39%. To draw a conclusion, there are ten categories of TV programmes and most of the tv programmers seen men.
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programmes
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seen
by sex during this period 2017 or 2018. The core information would
be underlined
below by selecting the main features
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in a chronological manner
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It is apparent that, the
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man
and
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women
are both seeing the news the 2017 or 2018 which has on the average the amount of 72% and 65%.
Moreover
, comedy films both have
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seen
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men
and
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women
through the 2017 and 2018. Albeit
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men
had
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seen
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tv
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programmes
highest
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than
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women
.
Furthermore
, most of the
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people
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seen
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live
sport coverage and
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women
have
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seen
too less about the quality of 80% and 40%.
However
,
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women
was viewing soaps which was highest the projection of 66%
rather
than
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men
.
In addition
, food and cookery was increasing by
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women
, not
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men
. More
precisely
, quiz
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shows
are viewing to similar the segment with exclusively 30%.
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conversely
,
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current
affairs or politics has most
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seen
by
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men
and
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some
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women
has
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seen
which was approximately the amount of 22% and 39%.

To draw a conclusion, there are ten categories of TV
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programmes
and most of the
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programmers
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IELTS academic The diagram shows selected types of TV programmes viewed by sex in Ne world Cambridge in 2017/2018.

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