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Prices in 4 different cities

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The given chart illustrates the percentage change in average house prices in 5 different cities New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt, and London in 1990, and 2002 compared to that in 1989. In overall view, the average house prices in 1989 were higher in most cities, then these prices started rising in 1996-2002. In years between 1990, and1995, and as compared to year 1989, Tokyo, London, and New York witnessed a decrease in the average prices, by 7percent for both London, and Tokyo, and 5 percent in New York. On the inverse trend, Madrid, and Frankfurt, show an increase in the average house prices by 2, and 4 percent respectively. On the other hand, in years range of 1996, and 2002, compared to that in 1989, London witness the highest increase in average house prices, followed by New York, Madrid, and Frankfurt, by a percentage of 12, 5, 4 and 2 percent sequentially. However, Tokyo's house prices increase from 7 percent in 1990 1995 to reach 5 in 1996, 2002.
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