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Population of turtles in India: 1980-2012

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The graph illustrates various species of turtles in India which includes Leatherback turtle, Green turtles, Olive Ridley turtles and others presenting a brief scenario of their presence over three decades. The accounting starts from the year 1980, were it is observed that all kinds of turtles were at a stagnation point which is one hundred. Olive Ridley turtles 20 seem to have the highest population compared to other species, the highest population count being one hundred and forty in the year 1997. The lowest number of occurrences is shown by Leatherback turtles (19) which dramatically fell after the year 1992. Having least count of approximately 55 in the year 2008, while highest count being in the year 1987 which equals approximately 115. It is analyzed that Green turtles and other species of turtles have a moderate figure of population. Articulating this, Green turtles have shown the least number of count in its curve which is 90, in the year 2012, while highest being 190 around the year 1982.
The graph illustrates various species of
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in India which includes
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Leatherback
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, Green
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, Olive
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Ridley
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presenting a brief scenario of their presence over three decades.

The accounting
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1980,
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it
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were at a stagnation point which is one hundred. Olive
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Ridley
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20 seem to have the highest population compared to other species, the highest population
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being one hundred and forty in the
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1997.

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Leatherback
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(19) which
dramatically
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1992. Having
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count
of approximately 55 in the
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2008, while highest
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being in the
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1987 which equals approximately 115.

It
is analyzed
that Green
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and other species of
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have a moderate figure of population. Articulating this, Green
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have shown the least number of
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in its curve which is 90, in the
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2012, while highest being 190 around the
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1982.
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