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population in Japan, which begins to decline afterwards. Future trend indicates for an ageing society.

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The given bar chart and table illustrates Japan's population trend in the past, present and future. Overall, it can be seen that 2005 was the peak of population in Japan, which begins to decline afterwards. The future trend indicates an ageing society. The bar chart shows that in 1950 people in Japan were 84. 1 million, then started increasing gradually and figure culminated with the population in 2005, with 127. 8 million. After, that it started declining gradually and reached 125. 4 million in the year 2015. in 2035 and 2055, the number of people will be 110 and 89. 9 million respectively. The table indicates the population distribution of aged 65 and over; in 1950, the number of people aged 65 and over was 4. 1 million (4. 9%), which was very low. In 2035, Japan will have an ageing society, with 34. 0% of the total population, which was only 20% in the year 2005. In 2055, this old age figure will contribute to 41. 0%, with 36. 5 million people in this old age category.
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bar chart and table illustrates Japan's
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trend in the past, present and future.

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, it can be
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seen
that 2005 was the peak of
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population
in Japan, which
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begins
to decline afterwards. The future trend indicates an
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ageing
society.

The bar chart
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shows
that in 1950
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people
in Japan were 84. 1
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million
, then
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started
increasing
gradually
and figure culminated with the
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population
in 2005, with 127. 8
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million
. After, that it
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started
declining
gradually
and reached 125. 4
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million
in the year 2015.
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in
2035 and 2055, the number of
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people
will be 110 and 89. 9
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million
respectively
.

The table indicates the
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population
distribution of aged 65 and over; in 1950, the number of
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people
aged 65 and over was 4. 1
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million
(4. 9%), which was
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very
low. In 2035, Japan will have an
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ageing
society, with 34. 0% of the total
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population
, which was
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only
20% in the year 2005. In 2055, this
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old
age figure will contribute to 41. 0%, with 36. 5
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people
in this
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old
age category.
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IELTS academic population in Japan, which begins to decline afterwards. Future trend indicates for an ageing society.

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