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Pineapple exports to the world in particular years

Pineapple exports to the world in particular years QRQ53
The given bar chart illustrates about pineapple exports throught out the world by top three pineapple producing countries during the year 2009 and 2019 and pie chart is giving the information about breakdown cost to the consumer for each pineapple in the year 2019. In the year 2009, country "A" has exported about 1 metric tonnes of pineapple whereas country "C" has shipped to other countries was only 0. 5 metric tonnes. Coming to the year 2019, country "A" has boosted its foreign trade to more than 10 metric tonnes and country. Country "C" has only minute change when compared to 2009. Coming to the cost for each pineapple, majority of the share was going to the distribution and retail with 35% and relatively 18% was profit. Taxes laid on this fruit was about 16% and 10% for its import licences and 12% of price was on international transport. Only 4-5% breakdown cost for each fruit by producer and export cost.
The
given
bar chart illustrates about pineapple exports
throught out
the world by top three pineapple producing
countries
during the
year
2009 and 2019 and pie chart is giving the information about breakdown
cost
to the consumer for each pineapple in the
year
2019.

In the
year
2009,
country
"
A
"
has exported about 1 metric tonnes of pineapple whereas
country
"
C
"
has shipped to other
countries
was
only
0. 5 metric tonnes. Coming to the
year
2019,
country
"
A
"
has boosted its foreign trade to more than 10 metric tonnes and
country
.
Country
"
C
"
has
only
minute
change
when compared to 2009.

Coming to the
cost
for each pineapple, majority of the share was going to the distribution and retail with 35% and
relatively
18% was profit. Taxes laid on this fruit was about 16% and 10% for its import
licences
and 12% of price was on international transport.
Only
4-5% breakdown
cost
for each fruit by producer and export
cost
.
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IELTS academic Pineapple exports to the world in particular years

Academic
  American English
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