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Pie chart and table for land degradation

Pie chart and table for land degradation 0aoB3
The given pie chart provided the main reasons the agricultural land becomes less productive. The table illustrates degradation by three regions of the world during the 1990s. Overall, as it is seen in the pie chart that positive Trend 35 percentage in over grazing. Therefore the overgrazing of land degraded bi three countries more higher from Oceania 11. 3 percentage and deforestation is 1. 7 %, but over cultivation is zero. oceania total land degraded 30 % by 1990s. However the Europe land degraded by deforestation 9. 8 % and over cultivation is 7. 7 %, but over grazing comparly yes it is 5. 5 %. The total land degraded incremented more than two countries it is 23 percentage. The North America land degraded by total is 5 percentage it is plammeted 1990s. In conclusion, the 1990s land degradation of three countries comparly plunged North America 5 percentage and second is Oceania it is 13%. The highest percentage of total land degraded by Europe.
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pie chart provided the main reasons the agricultural
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becomes less productive. The table illustrates degradation by three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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, as it is
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Trend 35
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in
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degraded bi three countries
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from Oceania 11. 3
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and deforestation is 1. 7 %,
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cultivation is zero.
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oceania
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degraded 30 % by 1990s.
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the Europe
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degraded by deforestation 9. 8 % and
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cultivation is 7. 7 %,
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grazing
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degraded incremented more than two countries it is 23
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. The North America
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degraded by
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is 5
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it is
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, the 1990s
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degradation of three countries
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plunged North America 5
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and second is Oceania it is 13%. The highest
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degraded by Europe.
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IELTS academic Pie chart and table for land degradation

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