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Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002.

The table depicts the data about how much spending for three categories of product and services in five European consumers. Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of products and services are represented in European consumers. It is noticable that the largest percentage of shoppers spending in any European countries for drinks, food and tobacco. There was the highest proportion of products in Turkey, comparison with another products and services was expenditure couldn't boast in Turkey county. Afterwards, in European countries the most expenditure on food, drinks and tobacco in Turkey, Ireland, Spain, Italy, Sweden respectively in 2002. On the other hand, the lowest proportion on leisure and education services spending money in Spain country around 2%. In contrast, Turkey county in leisure and education services where was spending income with twice as many those services. Finally, five European countries was almost similar spending on clothing and footwear.
The table depicts the data about how much
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spending
for three categories of
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product
and
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services
in five European consumers.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the proportion of
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products
and
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services
are represented
in European consumers. It is
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noticable
that the largest percentage of shoppers
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spending
in any European
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countries
for drinks, food and tobacco. There was the highest proportion of
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products
in Turkey, comparison with another
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products
and
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services
was expenditure couldn't boast in Turkey county. Afterwards, in European
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countries
the most expenditure on food, drinks and tobacco in Turkey, Ireland, Spain, Italy, Sweden
respectively
in 2002.
On the other hand
, the lowest proportion on leisure and education
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services
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spending
money in Spain
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country
around 2%.
In contrast
, Turkey county in leisure and education
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services
where was
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spending
income with twice as
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many
those
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services
.
Finally
, five European
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countries
was almost similar
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spending
on clothing and footwear.
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IELTS academic Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002.

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