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percentage of children in different activities

The chart illustrates the percentage of children aged between 5 and 14 that participate in various activities in Australia. Overall, it's clear that watching TV and videos is the most popular activity for children with 100% for both genders. Looking in more detail, Skateboarding and cycling are more preferred by boys with a 10% more than girls. In fact, 80% of boys play computer games with a 60% for girls relatively. Art and craft is the only activity that girls are in to more than boys with a 55% for the former and 40% for the latter.
The chart illustrates the percentage of children

aged between 5 and 14 that participate

in
various activities in Australia.

Overall
, it's
clear
that watching TV and videos

is the most popular activity for children with 100%

for both genders.

Looking in more detail, Skateboarding and cycling are

more preferred by boys with a 10% more than girls.

In fact, 80% of boys play computer games with a 60%

for girls
relatively
.

Art and craft is the
only
activity that girls are in

to more than boys with a 55% for the former and 40%

for
the latter.
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IELTS academic percentage of children in different activities

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