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The provided set of maps depicts the changes to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010.

The provided set of maps depicts the changes to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010. wjJl

The provided set of maps depicts the changes to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010. Examining the first map, aircraft manufacturing and assembly building was located in north-west as well as one runway was running from north to east. But, after two decades, both places were replaced by private housing in the year 2010. Moreover, one road was connected this housing, which was running from east to west and belong from main road. Apart from these, a staff club was established into the administration building. Besides these, in both years, staff parkin took place on the south-western side. However, a new parking slot was constructed south-eastern side, first right after the security gate. As well as complex of jet engine manufacturing & testing was expanded and added a overhead walkway also. Furthermore, place of helipad was relocated at center part of the aircraft industries. Overall, there were some dramatical changes had been done after 20 years.

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changes
 to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010.

Examining the first
 map, aircraft manufacturing and assembly building was located
 in north-west as well
 as one runway was running from north to east. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, after two decades, both places were replaced
 by private housing in the year 2010. Moreover
, one road was connected
 this housing, which was running from east to west and belong from main road. Apart from these, a staff club was established
 into the administration building.

Besides
 these, in both years, staff Possible spelling mistake found.parkingpar kinpark in
parkin
 took place on the south-western side. However
, a new parking slot was constructed
 south-eastern side, first
 right after the security gate. As well
 as complex of jet engine manufacturing & testing was expanded
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 overhead walkway also
. Furthermore
, place of helipad was relocated
 at center part of the aircraft industries.

Overall
, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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dramatical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 had been done
 after 20 years. 