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The provided set of maps depicts the changes to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010.

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The provided set of maps depicts the changes to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010. Examining the first map, aircraft manufacturing and assembly building was located in north-west as well as one runway was running from north to east. But, after two decades, both places were replaced by private housing in the year 2010. Moreover, one road was connected this housing, which was running from east to west and belong from main road. Apart from these, a staff club was established into the administration building. Besides these, in both years, staff parkin took place on the south-western side. However, a new parking slot was constructed south-eastern side, first right after the security gate. As well as complex of jet engine manufacturing & testing was expanded and added a overhead walkway also. Furthermore, place of helipad was relocated at center part of the aircraft industries. Overall, there were some dramatical changes had been done after 20 years.
The provided set of maps depicts the
changes
to the ace aircraft industries site between 1991 and 2010.

Examining the
first
map, aircraft manufacturing and assembly building
was located
in north-west
as well
as one runway was running from north to east.
But
, after two decades, both places
were replaced
by private housing in the year 2010.
Moreover
, one road
was connected
this housing, which was running from east to west and belong from main road. Apart from these, a staff club
was established
into the administration building.

Besides
these, in both years, staff
parkin
took place on the south-western side.
However
, a new parking slot
was constructed
south-eastern side,
first
right after the security gate.
As well
as complex of jet engine manufacturing & testing
was expanded
and
added
a
overhead walkway
also
.
Furthermore
, place of helipad
was relocated
at center part of the aircraft industries.

Overall
, there were
some
dramatical
changes
had
been done
after 20 years.
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