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people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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The chart shows us the results of a survey about In Sydney, 44% of people have bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks and Melbourne have 43 percentage. In addition, Brisbane and Adelaide have the same amount that 34%. 37% of bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks in Hobart. Citizens of Hobart bought instant coffee in last weeks have 54%. The second high amount is Brisbane have 53%. Melbourne and Adelaide have a nearly same amount, have 48% and 50%. The lowest number is 46% in Sydney. The last information is about percentage of people that went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks. In Sydney, the percentage of people went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks have 62%. Next, Melbourne and Hobart have a nearly amount, have 64% and 63%. Citizens of Brisbane went to a cafe for coffee or tea have 56 percentage. In Adelaide have 50%. In conclusion, the higher amount of the survey is the people went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks as it shows higher than the other two.
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