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People in government and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) are talking about global warming.

People in government and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) are talking about global warming. eXqx
People in government and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) are talking about global warming. But governments, companies, and other people do not agree on what to do about it. Some things that could reduce warming are to burn less fossil fuels, grow more trees, eat less meat, and put some carbon dioxide back in the ground. Shading the Earth from some sunlight (this is called geoengineering) could also reduce warming but we don't understand how it might change weather in other ways. Also people could adapt to any temperature changes. The Kyoto Protocol and Paris Agreement try to reduce pollution from the burning of fossil fuels. Most governments have agreed to them but some people in government think nothing should change. The gas produced by cows digestion also causes global warming, because it contains a greenhouse gas called methane.
People
in
government
and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate
Change
(IPCC) are talking about global
warming
.
But
governments
,
companies
, and other
people
do not
agree
on what to do about it.
Some
things that could
reduce
warming
are to burn less fossil fuels, grow more trees, eat less meat, and put
some
carbon dioxide back in the ground. Shading the Earth from
some
sunlight (this
is called
geoengineering) could
also
reduce
warming
but
we don't understand how it might
change
weather in other ways.
Also
people
could adapt to any temperature
changes
. The Kyoto Protocol and Paris Agreement try to
reduce
pollution from the burning of fossil fuels. Most
governments
have
agreed
to them
but
some
people
in
government
think
nothing should
change
. The gas produced by cows digestion
also
causes global
warming
,
because
it contains a greenhouse gas called methane.
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IELTS academic People in government and the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) are talking about global warming.

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