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For most of the past 2000 years the temperature didn't change much.

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For most of the past 2000 years the temperature didn't change much. There were some times where the temperatures were a little warmer or cooler. One of the most famous warm times was the Medieval Warm Period and one of the most famous cool times was the Little Ice Age. Other proxy measurements like the temperature measured in deep holes mostly agree with the tree rings. Tree rings and bore holes can only help scientists work out the temperature back to about 1000 years ago. Ice cores are also used to find out the temperature back to about half a million years ago.
For most of the past 2000 years the
temperature
didn't
change
much. There were
some
times where
the
temperatures
were a
little
warmer or cooler. One of the most
famous
warm times was the Medieval Warm Period and one of the most
famous
cool times was the
Little
Ice Age. Other proxy measurements like the
temperature
measured in deep holes
mostly
agree
with the tree rings. Tree rings and bore holes can
only
help
scientists work out the
temperature
back to about 1000 years ago. Ice cores are
also
used
to find out the
temperature
back to about half a million years ago.
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IELTS academic For most of the past 2000 years the temperature didn't change much.

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