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Many parents may accommodate children’s demands, which could arouse various concerns. A child’s personality will get worse due to their parents' tendency to be permissive. To start with, children become accustomed to getting whatever they find it difficult to accept the limits imposed on them by rules, which may incline them to do criminal actions. Children are not capable of full independence and can harm them as adults. For example, adulthood is prone to rebellion when their needs are not met, the inability to be fully independent. So they don’t know how to control their life and handle unexpected situations that happen to them.
Many
parents may accommodate children’s demands, which could arouse various concerns. A child’s personality will
get
worse due to their parents' tendency to be permissive. To
start
with, children become accustomed to getting whatever they find it difficult to accept the limits imposed on them by
rules
, which may incline them to do criminal actions. Children are not capable of full independence and can harm them as adults.
For example
, adulthood is prone to rebellion when their needs are not met, the inability to be
fully
independent.
So
they don’t know how to control their life and handle unexpected situations that happen to them.
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IELTS academic parent give childent everything they want

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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