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ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. 7ar8b
The pie chart illustrates the results of a survey of people those who went different types of four tourist places in Britain in 1999. Because Britain has much famous for his tourisms. Overall, if we review the chart theme parks is on top of the list where most of the people visits. The second one is museums & galleries in UK that is famous for tourist after theme parks. And the last two are historic houses & monuments and wildlife parks & zoos these places are not attract the people of the Britain because of this situation not every person want to visit those area. In these facts, the percentages are very least. On the one side of the pie chart, we have the two places theme parks and historic houses & monuments. most of the people percentage lie s on theme park due to park has many of attractive places where went and enjoyed a lot. every want to go those places where they get too much fun and felt relax theme park one from those places that having a lots of adventures, beach, towers and port because of these thing people wanted to visit here. people also went to historic houses & monuments because we can not neglect this place due to some from total calculation visit this place. The percentage of these places is much more. On the other hand of the chart, two more different places where people are visited that are museums & galleries and wildlife park & zoos percentages of 37% and 9%. Interest in museum was more in 20th century that was reason people went these places because there was a lot antics and precious thing present there. so, the percentage is on second number. In past, people did not watch and saw wildlife and zoos moreover people want those places where they feel comfortable and spend luxurious time with family.
The pie
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those who
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different
types of four tourist
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places
in Britain in 1999.
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Britain has much
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tourisms
.

Overall
, if we review the
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chart
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theme
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parks
is on top of the list where most of the
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people
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visits
. The second one is museums & galleries in UK
that is
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parks
. And the last two are historic
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houses
& monuments and wildlife
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parks
& zoos these
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places
are not
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attract
the
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people
of the Britain
because of this
situation not every person want to
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visit
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those area
. In these facts, the
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percentages
are
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least.

On the one side of the pie
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, we have the two
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places
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theme
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parks
and historic
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houses
& monuments.
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most
of the
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people
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percentage
lie s on
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park
due to
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park
has
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of attractive
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places
where
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went
and enjoyed a lot.
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every
want to go those
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places
where they
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get
too much fun and felt relax
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theme
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one from those
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that having
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a lots
of adventures, beach, towers and port
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of these thing
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people
wanted to
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visit
here.
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people
also
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to historic
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houses
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due to
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from total calculation
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this
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. The
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of these
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is much more.

On the other hand
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, two more
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that are museums & galleries and wildlife
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of 37% and 9%. Interest in museum was more in 20th century that was reason
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went
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a lot antics
and precious thing present there.
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, the
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is on second number.
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,
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people
did not
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watch
and
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saw
wildlife and zoos
moreover
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people
want those
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where they feel comfortable and spend luxurious time with family.
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IELTS academic ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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