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online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand

Retail sections marketing through the internet is illustrated in the chart by the 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand. Overall, it is obvious that the travel part keeps most ratio than another for both years. Books and film/music, both of them increasing through the years from 2003 to 2013, However, the proportion of clothes is decreased over the last decade In 2003, the ratio of books is the least part of entire retail sections, nevertheless, percentage of books rise and reached nearly 22%. The chart shows, the decreasing trend for the travel ratio over the last decade from 36% to 29%. The ratio of film/music increased dramatically from 2003 to 2013, and reach 33% and keep the most percentage of whole retail divisions in New Zealand. The proportion of clothes to follow and decreasing tendency, and decline from 24% to 16%, therefore, in 2013, clothes keep the minimum percentage of an entire dime store in New Zealand.

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 the minimum percentage of an entire dime store in New Zealand. 