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Online ordering food to delivery to customer describe steps.

Online ordering food to delivery to customer describe steps. jbKDM
The flow chart shows different steps of ordering food online and delivered to customer. At first, customer go to food portal and search for food items. Among different foods they choose how much quantity they want. After finalising order they make payment online through credit or debit card. Once customer make payment to online store owner the order list is finalised and restaurant process order. Online store owner get commission from merchant. when order is ready it delivere to the customer. In delivery time punctuation is very important. At last, Customer receive delivery from merchnat.
The flow chart
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shows
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different
steps of ordering
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food
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online
and delivered to
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customer
. At
first
,
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customer
go to
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food
portal and search for
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food
items. Among
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different
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foods
they choose how much quantity they want. After
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finalising
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order
they
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make
payment
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online
through credit or debit card. Once
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customer
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make
payment to
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online
store owner the
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order
list is
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finalised
and restaurant process
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order
.
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Online
store owner
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get
commission from merchant.
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when
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order
is ready it
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delivere
to the
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customer
. In delivery time punctuation is
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very
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important
. At last,
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Customer
receive delivery from
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merchnat
.
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IELTS academic Online ordering food to delivery to customer describe steps.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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