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Coffee or tea drinking habits of people from 5 cities in Australia

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The bar chart details drinking habits in 5 Australian cities related to coffee and tea which are bought in the last 4 weeks. Overall, more than half the population in all cities except Adelaide went to a cafe for coffee or tea, while buying instant coffee was also popular and buying fresh coffee generally isn't popular. Looking first of all at going to cafes, it was most characteristic of Melbourne and Hobart at 64% and 63%, respectively. Sydney was comparably high at just over 60%, followed by Brisbane at over 55%, and finally Adelaide at under 50%. Adelaide was the only city where people bought more instant coffee by a slight margin
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, it was most characteristic of Melbourne and Hobart at 64% and 63%,
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IELTS academic Coffee or tea drinking habits of people from 5 cities in Australia

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2 paragraphs
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