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On the greenhouse influence on the temperature of Earth

On the greenhouse influence on the temperature of Earth GBDw

The diagrams present data on the greenhouse influence on the temperature of the Earth. Overall, the process consists of three stages. Beginning with sun produces radiation ending up with the sun Earth becomes warmer. First of all 51% of the sun's light reaches the Earth, and 20% of that light goes to the clouds, 6% to the atmosphere, and the rest to the Earth. In the next steps the reys coming from the sun disappear no later than during the day but the greenhouses retain their heat. This heat makes the Earth suitable for life. In the least steps the pollution may increase greenhouse gases and more greenhouse gases trap and reflect more heat and Earth becomes warmer. These rays are absorbed into the ground and do not return

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greenhouse
 influence on the temperature of the Earth.

Overall
, the process consists of three stages. Beginning with sun produces radiation ending up with the sun You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
Earth
 becomes warmer.

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First of all
 51% of the sun's light reaches the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
Earth
, and 20% of that light goes to the clouds, 6% to the atmosphere, and the rest to the Earth.

In the next
 steps the Possible spelling mistake found.washasdaysgasransays
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 coming from the sun disappear no later than during the day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconservatorynurseryarboretum
greenhouses
 retain their heat. This heat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
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Earth
 suitable for life.

In the least steps the pollution may increase You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconservatorynurseryarboretum
greenhouse
 gases and more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconservatorynurseryarboretum
greenhouse
 gases trap and reflect more heat and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
Earth
 becomes warmer. These rays are absorbed
 into the ground and do not Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphreturn.return!return?return:return,return;
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