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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. 3GJX
The chart gives information about the number of changes of incidents in three various crimes (burglary, car theft and robbery) in Panama City between 2010 and 2019. Overall, it can be seen that at the beginning of the period, burglary was the highest among three types of crime, ending up the period lower than car theft. However, both car theft and robbery had similar trend lines but were in different level of crime rates. In terms of burglary, in 2010, the number of this crime started off higher than those two types of crime, about 3400 incidents found in that year, compared with 2700 cases and about 600 cases in car theft and robbery respectively. After 2011, the number of incidents of car theft and robbery remained steadily, while cases of burglary experienced a considerable decline to 1000 cases in 2015, and then increased to approximately 1500 cases in 2016, remaining at this level until 2019 regard less of the fluctuation. Following this, cases of car theft had a slight dip to approximately 2100 incidents in 2013 and had a moderate increase to about 2700 cases at the end of the period. Interestingly, there was little changes and fluctuation of robbery since 2012 but managed to remain between 500 to 1000 cases until 2019.
The chart gives information about the number of
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crimes
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(burglary
,
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car
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theft
and
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robbery)
in Panama City between 2010 and 2019.

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, it can be
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seen
that at the beginning of the period,
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burglary
was the highest among three types of
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crime
, ending up the period lower than
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car
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theft
.
However
, both
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car
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theft
and
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robbery
had similar trend lines
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but
were in
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different
level of
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crime
rates.

In terms of
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burglary
, in 2010, the number of this
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crime
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started
off higher than those two types of
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crime
, about 3400
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incidents
found in that year, compared with 2700 cases and about 600 cases in
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car
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theft
and
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robbery
respectively
. After 2011, the number of
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incidents
of
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car
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theft
and
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robbery
remained
steadily
, while cases of
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burglary
experienced a considerable decline to 1000 cases in 2015, and then increased to approximately 1500 cases in 2016, remaining at this level until 2019 regard less of the fluctuation.

Following this, cases of
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car
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theft
had a slight dip to approximately 2100
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incidents
in 2013 and had a moderate increase to about 2700 cases at the
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end
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Interestingly
, there was
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robbery
since 2012
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managed to remain
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between 500 to 1000
cases until 2019.
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