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The two pie chart below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000.

The two pie chart below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. 20px

The rendered diverse histogram illustrated about the information of alterations in the world population by territory during the year. As it is given in the graph that Asia population was at the peak, whereas it fall down 6%. Moving further, the masses of Europe was one fourth. The. most striking point that population increases significantly throughout the years. Moving further, the proportions of Africa was 4 percent. It inclines two fold in upcoming time. the percentages of north America was less in 1900 but in 2000 it soared steadily by 8%. The population of other nations was almost same it was nearly 3%. There was no clue about north America but it increases significantly.

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