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Oil production 1960 to 2000

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The polylinear graph depicts information about globally manufacturing of oil in four distinct nation in the tenure of 40 years. The data is given in million barrels per day. Overview makes its constituents that the nation of middle is displayed Lion's share amongst all countries throughout forty years whereas the output of North America was seen as minority in given span. Buy scrutinizing the line graph it is vividly in fact that the rating of oil in Middle East was one fifth million barrels per day in initial year and soared slightly until after 10 years where is the output of oil in Africa forward approximately 3 less than Middle East in 1960. Followed by the manufacturing of oil in Africa overtake the yield of Middle East in 1970 and accounted as 30 million barrels. Surprisingly, the output of Middle East skyrocketed and reached at nearly 55 million barrels in last given year while the production of oil in Africa took a nosedive in 1980 and then executed at 40 million barrels in 2000. Analysing furthur, the manufacturing of oil in Asia and North America native land was at minority with the 5 million barrels. Thereafter they both upsarg and continuously but the production of North America was wonderfully higher than Asia. In 1980 America produced just above the 10 million barrels on the other hand North America's output was 10 Millions more than Asia. Lastly the figure of Asia and North America seen as 32 millions and millions barrels each day respectively.
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graph depicts information about globally manufacturing of
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oil
in four distinct
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nation
in the tenure of 40 years. The data is
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given
in
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million
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barrels
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Overview
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makes
its constituents that the nation of
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middle
is displayed
Lion's share amongst all countries throughout forty years whereas the
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output
of
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North
America was
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seen
as minority in
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given
span.

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scrutinizing the line graph it is
vividly
in fact that the rating of
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oil
in
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Middle
East was one fifth
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million
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barrels
per day in initial
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year
and soared
slightly
until after 10
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is the
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output
of
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oil
in Africa forward approximately 3 less than
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Middle
East in 1960. Followed by the manufacturing of
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in Africa overtake the yield of
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Middle
East in 1970 and accounted as 30
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million
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barrels
.
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, the
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Middle
East skyrocketed and reached at
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55
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barrels
in last
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while the production of
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in Africa took a nosedive in 1980 and then executed at 40
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in 2000.

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Analysing
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, the manufacturing of
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in Asia and
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America native land was at minority with the 5
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upsarg
and
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the production of
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America was
wonderfully
higher than Asia. In 1980 America produced
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above the 10
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on the other hand
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North
America's
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output
was 10
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more than Asia.
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the figure of Asia and
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America
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IELTS academic Oil production 1960 to 2000

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