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I have made many plans in my life.Almost all plans i have made are related to my work or study. But there is a plan which i would like to talk and whivh is not related to my study.l made this plan due to my hobby of travelling.

I have made many plans in my life. Almost all plans i have made are related to my work or study. But there is a plan which i would like to talk and whivh is not related to my study. l made this plan due to my hobby of travelling. bxPgX
I have made many plans in my life. Almost all plans i have made are related to my work or study. But there is a plan which i would like to talk about today and which is not related to my study. l made this plan due to my hobby of travelling. I loves traveling very much. I HAVE ALWAYS WANTED to travel many new destinations and explore them but due to my father's busy schedule and my studies, i have not been able to travel much destinations till now.
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due to my father's busy schedule and my studies,
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IELTS academic I have made many plans in my life. Almost all plans i have made are related to my work or study. But there is a plan which i would like to talk and whivh is not related to my study. l made this plan due to my hobby of travelling.

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