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changes which took place in university sports centre from present to future plans.

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The two maps describe a number of changes which took place in university sports centre from present to future plans. In general, as can be seen from the pictures, the centre witnessed dramatic changes. Looking at the maps in more detail, at present, a pool(25m) is surrounded by gym in the north, seating on the right hand side, changing room to the west and reception. There are two outdoor courts on either side of the centre. As can be seen from the second picture, the most natable change that took place at university sports centre at future plans is a leisure pool replaced by outdoor courts to the left hand side of the centre. The gym is widen and outdoor courts to the right hand side is demolished to make way for sports hall. In the north east, there are two dance studio constructed. Changing room and seating are unchange. Besides, the reception is extended add sports shop and café. Finally, two changing room are constructed on both sides south east and south west of the centre.
The two maps
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a number of
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changes
which took place in university
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sports
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centre
from present to future plans.

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, as can be
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seen
from the pictures, the
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centre
witnessed dramatic
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changes
.

Looking at the maps in more detail, at present, a pool(
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25m
)
is surrounded
by gym in the north, seating on the
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right hand
side, changing room to the west and reception. There are two outdoor courts on either side of the
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centre
.

As can be
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seen
from the second picture, the most
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natable
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change
that took place at university
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sports
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centre
at future plans is a leisure pool replaced by outdoor courts to the
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left hand
side of the
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centre
. The gym is
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widen
and outdoor courts to the
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right hand
side
is demolished
to
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make
way for
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sports
hall. In the
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north east
, there are two dance
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studio
constructed. Changing room and seating are
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unchange
.
Besides
, the reception
is extended
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add
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sports
shop and café.
Finally
, two changing room
are constructed
on both
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sides
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south east
and
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south west
of the
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centre
.
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