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Nowadays, people are facing newer environmental challenges. Some people say that the extinction of particular species of plants and animals is the prime concern whereas the other side say there are more crucial environmental issues

Nowadays, people are facing newer environmental challenges. Some people say that the extinction of particular species of plants and animals is the prime concern whereas the other side say there are more crucial environmental issues Nyl0N

Nowadays, people are facing newer environmental challenges. Some people say that the extinction of particular species of plants and animals is the prime concern whereas I agree with the other side of the view that at present there are more crucial environmental issues. In my paragraphs below, I will discuss both the views and explain why I agree with the latter view. There's no doubt that the fauna and flora help in maintaining the balance of our Planet Earth. They build the diversity of the ecological system and hence, it is vital to preserve them. We are losing various species of plants and animals because of excessive deforestation in order to construct industries. It is important to take appropriate measure in order to preserve the rare species of animal and plants, which are on the verge of the extinction. We can achieve this by spreading awareness and educating the people about the need to preserve our endangered species. In my opinion, there are other environmental problems that need immediate attention. For example, air and water pollution have become major concerns now. There is exponential rise in the number of vehicles on the roads and that has reduced the air quality. People are forced to breathe polluted air which causes various lung diseases. According to research done at the Howard university, cases of lung disease have increased by 27 times over the years. Also, water pollution is another cause of concern. Due to bad human habits like discharging factory effluents into water bodies, access to pure water has reduced. As a result, many people and animals die each year from drinking polluted water. As these problems directly affect our health, in my opinion, they need more attention

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