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Notebook computer owners (as % of each country's total population)

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The bar chart outlines the percentage of computer ownership in 10 western-European countries over a five-year period, from 1995 to 2000. According to the figures it is noteworthy that all countries experienced a considerable increase in the number of computers owned. In 1995 most notebooks were possessed by the British, German, Italian and, to a less extent, French citizens. In particular the 4% of people living in the first three counties and less than 2% of French inhabitants. On the contrary, in the same year, Scandinavian populations did not owe a considerable number of laptops. As a matter of fact, the percentage of owners barely reached 1%. However, figures appear to be completely different in 2000. Despite the fact that all countries showed a substantial growth, Scandinavian countries had the most marked rise, with percentages of possession spanning from 12% to 17%. The increase in the other countries cited above was less pronounced, from 9% to 14% of total ownership. Lastly, Spain and the Netherlands show the fewest numbers of laptops possessed both in 1995 and in 2000, although experiencing a growth too.
The bar chart outlines the percentage of computer ownership in 10 western-European
countries
over a five-year period, from 1995 to 2000. According to the figures it is noteworthy that all
countries
experienced a considerable increase in the number of computers
owned
. In 1995 most notebooks
were possessed
by the British, German, Italian and, to a less extent, French citizens.
In particular
the 4% of
people
living in the
first
three counties and less than 2% of French inhabitants.
On the contrary
, in the same year, Scandinavian populations did not owe a considerable number of laptops. As a matter of fact, the percentage of owners
barely
reached 1%.
However
, figures appear to be completely
different
in 2000. Despite the fact that all
countries
showed
a substantial growth, Scandinavian
countries
had the most marked rise, with percentages of possession spanning from 12% to 17%. The increase in the other
countries
cited above was less pronounced, from 9% to 14% of total ownership.
Lastly
, Spain and the Netherlands
show
the fewest numbers of laptops possessed both in 1995 and in 2000, although experiencing a growth too.
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