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National Gallery Museum, British Museum, Victoria and Albert Museum

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he graph provides information about the millions of people who visited London museums(National Gallery Museum, British Museum, Victoria and Albert Museum) throughout 6 years from 2007 and 2012. Overall, its clearly seen that the number of visitors reached the top in 2012 with around 30 million visitors to each 3 museums. While it had hitting the low-point in 2009. In 2009 the figure of visitors was similarly in all museums ablut aroud 8 millions and low foe each museum. The National Gallery Museum visitors had increased since 2007. Wherease its decreased in Victoria and Albert Museum. But it was remains steady in British Museum. The chart evident that there had been a fluctions on the number of people in all three museums throughout the period.
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provides information about the millions of
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who visited London museums(National Gallery
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, British
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, Victoria and Albert
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throughout 6 years
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that the number of
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reached the top in 2012 with around 30 million
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to each 3
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8 millions and low foe each
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. The National Gallery
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had increased since 2007.
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it was remains steady in British Museum.

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IELTS academic National Gallery Museum, British Museum, Victoria and Albert Museum

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