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Most of the people do not care enough about environment issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the people do not care enough about environment issue. 7nWn
This proverb asserts that Heal the earth people heal ourselves ". About environmental issue, there are same people do not care abundance. I partially agree with this statement. The reason behind my indication are articulated in trailed paragraphs. * Qu To start with, there are lots of people spread dirt and that impact on environment. They spread dirt Or like, people throw waste here and there and even a plethora of people do not have knowledge about bio waste consequently even government do advertisement to aware about bio waste knowledge. Environment pollution rise due to the fact by industry's factory waste for example in country there are a number of Th industries waste in sea, lake and river even their factories smoke also spread pollution and that impact on environment now every one have their own transportation, transportation also cause to environmental pollution and 30% environment pollution happen in light of the fact that of transportation. In industry, specially from based steel industry where impact of on environmental pollution. On the other hand, Individuals care about environment pollution. A number of people can not throw their waste here and there. Group should be made to clean area. Numerous schools and college student make group, and they divided area and then area wise they clean that area and also ma charts and posters related save environment and in numerous schools held the exhibition and competition related to p environment save consequently, children and other people also aware about environment pollution. A number of people do drama and advertisement hence people aware about pollution By agglomerating all the points elaborated above, it can be concluded that government and a number of people do advertisement to aware about pollution issues on the contrary people can to accompanied to protect environment indeed.
This proverb asserts that Heal the earth
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people
heal ourselves
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. About environmental issue, there are same
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people
do not care abundance. I
partially
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agree
with this statement. The reason behind my indication
are articulated
in trailed paragraphs.

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To
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start
with, there are lots of
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people
spread dirt and that impact on
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environment
. They spread dirt Or like,
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people
throw
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waste
here and there and even a plethora of
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people
do not have knowledge about bio
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waste
consequently
even
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government
do advertisement to
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aware
about bio
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waste
knowledge.
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Environment
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pollution
rise due to the fact by industry's factory
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waste
for example
in country there are a
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number
of
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industries
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waste
in sea, lake and river even their factories smoke
also
spread
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pollution
and that impact on
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environment
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now
every one have their
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own
transportation, transportation
also
cause to environmental
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pollution
and 30%
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environment
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pollution
happen in light of the fact that of transportation. In industry,
specially
from based steel industry where impact of on environmental pollution.

On the other hand
, Individuals care about
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environment
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pollution
. A
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number
of
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people
can not throw their
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waste
here and there. Group should
be made
to clean
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area
. Numerous schools and college student
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make
group, and they divided
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area
and then
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area
wise they clean that
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area
and
also
ma charts and posters related save
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environment
and in numerous schools held the exhibition and competition related to p
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environment
save
consequently
, children and other
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people
also
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aware
about
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environment
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pollution
. A
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number
of
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people
do drama and advertisement
hence
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people
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aware
about
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pollution


By agglomerating all the points elaborated above, it can
be concluded
that
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government
and a
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number
of
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people
do advertisement to
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aware
about
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pollution
issues
on the contrary
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people
can to accompanied to

protect
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environment
indeed
.
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IELTS academic Most of the people do not care enough about environment issue.

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