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The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Vj1m
Both mother and father are the main pillars in a child’s life. Who should be more involved with a child’s upbringing, the mother, the father, or both? I believe in the saying; it takes two to tango. Children need both their parents’ intervention to grow holistically in their life. I have two boys. Being an overthinking mother, I’ve always needed a companion who is laid back and logical to calm me down in difficult situations. My boys have always observed how my husband dealt with situations calmly, whereas, I panicked every time something bad happened to them. This variation was enough for them to witness two different perspectives and decide for themselves which perspective made more sense to them. One of my boys has built rapport with his father since they both share the same interest, Lego. I wouldn’t have been able to understand this passion if it wasn’t for my husband. This bond was necessary during the pandemic when our kids needed a lot of help with their online learning. Due to the bond that my younger child had with his dad, my child was open to learn a lot from him. The time they spent together during the online learning, lead my child to become amongst the most knowledgeable children in his class. My older child is a very sensitive boy who didn’t build the same bond with his dad as the younger one did. I believe understanding this fact, was a motive for both my child and husband to find a common ground. They had to find a different kind of bond that was built with the younger child. This itself must have taught my older son that sometimes we may not bond with certain people the way we do with others. It also taught him that sometimes you need to be open minded enough to try and find other ways to bond with people around us. In conclusion, I believe that the involvement of both parents plays a vital role in a child’s view to life, as it gives him an insight of the diversity of the world around them.
Both mother and father are the main pillars in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child’s
life.

Who should be more involved with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child’s
upbringing, the mother, the father, or both?

I believe in the saying; it takes two to tango. Children need both their parents’ intervention to grow
holistically
in their life.

I have two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
. Being an overthinking mother, I’ve always needed a companion who
is laid
back and logical to calm me down in difficult situations. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
have always observed how my husband dealt with situations
calmly
, whereas, I panicked every time something
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
happened to them. This variation was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
for them to witness two
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
perspectives and decide for themselves which perspective made more sense to them.

One of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
has built rapport with his father since they both share the same interest, Lego. I wouldn’t have been able to understand this passion if it wasn’t for my husband. This bond was necessary during the pandemic when our kids needed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with their online learning. Due to the bond that my younger
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child
had with his dad, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child
was open to learn a lot from him. The time they spent together during the online learning, lead my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child
to become amongst the most knowledgeable children in his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

My older
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child
is a
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very
sensitive
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boy
who didn’t build the same bond with his dad as the younger one did. I believe understanding this fact, was a motive for both my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child
and husband to find a common ground. They had to find a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kind of bond that
was built
with the younger
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child
. This itself
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have taught my older son that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
we may not bond with certain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
the way we do with others. It
also
taught him that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
you need to be
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
open minded
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enough
to
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
try and
find other ways to bond with
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people
around us.

In conclusion
, I believe that the involvement of both parents plays a vital role in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
child’s
view to life, as it gives him an insight of the diversity of the world around them.
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IELTS academic The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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