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The chart illustrates the proportion of men and women students who passed in seven different subjects in their high school competency examination between 2010 and 2011. It can be seen that, in the figure both male and female students outperformed in computer science, foreign languages and mathematics, and overall, female students did best in every subject except in geography. In details, there was 56. 3 percent female students who passed in computer sciences, compared to 42. 1 percent of male students. This was the highest passing rates noted in all subjects. Furthermore, in foreign languages and mathematics there was only 1% difference in the percentage of both gender. In these two subjects with approximately 47 percent of students who passed the competency exam. In physics, the percentage of male student who passed the exam was 34. 5 percent, and slightly higher in female at 36. 7 percent. Moreover, male students outperformed in geography with 30. 3 percent and about 10 percent less than for female students. Also, it is noticeable that the passing rates in chemistry and history was lower than 31 percent compared to other subjects in both gender.
The chart illustrates the proportion of
men
and women
students
who
passed
in seven
different
subjects
in their high school competency examination between 2010 and 2011. It can be
seen
that, in the figure both male and
female
students
outperformed in computer science, foreign languages and mathematics, and
overall
,
female
students
did best in every
subject
except in geography.

In
details
, there was 56. 3
percent
female
students
who
passed
in computer sciences, compared to 42. 1
percent
of male
students
. This was the highest passing rates noted in all
subjects
.
Furthermore
, in foreign languages and mathematics there was
only
1% difference in the percentage of both gender. In these two
subjects
with approximately 47
percent
of
students
who
passed
the competency exam.

In physics, the percentage of male
student
who
passed
the exam was 34. 5
percent
, and
slightly
higher in
female
at 36. 7
percent
.
Moreover
, male
students
outperformed in geography with 30. 3
percent
and about 10
percent
less than for
female
students
.
Also
, it is noticeable that the passing rates in chemistry and history was lower than 31
percent
compared to other
subjects
in both gender.
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