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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of students members in college clubs in one year 2012 for both gender. Overall, the chat clearly evident that the highest section was engineering for men while the lowest one was education. by contrast, the greatest one was education with girls and the least was engineering. Both, female and male had a similarly proportion in medicine major. In terms of science section male had a large percentage just over 60% while female only around 40%. According to the figure male had a high members in all sections while female had the lowest number on it.

The bar chart provides information about the proportion of students members in college clubs in one year 2012 for both gender.

Overall
, the chat clearly
 evident that the highest section was engineering for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 while the lowest one was education. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
 contrast, the greatest one was education with girls and the least was engineering.

Both, female and male had a You used an adverb ('similarly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('proportion') instead of another adjective.
similarly proportion
 in medicine major. In terms of science section male had a large percentage This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 60% while female This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 around 40%.

According to the figure male had a high Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "member"?member
members
 in all sections while female had the lowest number on it. 