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The diagram below shows the plans for designing a trade show floor from 2009 to 2010.

The diagram below shows the plans for designing a trade show floor from 2009 to 2010. KWQx1
This diagram below illustrate the schemes for designing a trade show between 2009 to 2010. Overall, the rooms switched places, moreover some become bigger from 2009 to 2010. Refreshment and registration, also exibition area and confernece hall exchanged places. Seats in the conference hall become less and display stands in the exibition area instead more from 2009 to 2010. Meeting room was removed in 2010. Also this year lounge area was adding to balcony.
This diagram below illustrate the schemes for designing a trade
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between 2009 to 2010
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Overall
, the rooms switched places,
moreover
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some
become bigger from 2009 to 2010. Refreshment and registration,
also
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exibition
area and
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confernece
hall exchanged places. Seats in the conference hall become less and display stands in the
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exibition
area
instead
more from 2009 to 2010. Meeting room
was removed
in 2010.
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Also
this year lounge area was adding to balcony.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the plans for designing a trade show floor from 2009 to 2010.

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