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map Paradise Island past and present

map Paradise Island past and present L3Q68
The map illustrates the main changes which have taken place in Paradise Island over the last year and present. It is observed that before Island was more green. To be more exact palm tres were in the south side and west and east sides of Paradise Island. Furthermore in the north-east side of Island was natural spring. And opposite of that was scientific research station which is located in the south-west side. Besides that not big beach was out of island which was near to the sea. Moreover was pier and boat for visiting. According to the map now Paradis Island has become more urbanize. For example, in the central side of map open restaurant wwas build also BBQ area locate near that. Furthermore cafe was beside the natural spring. Also was significant changes in the centr of island. Foe instance, swimming pool and housing facility have built to visitors of Paradise Island. Besides that instead of pier has built pier for cruise ship. Overall, Paradise Island was more urbanize and modern than last year. Island has become modern with housing and relaxing facilities.
The map illustrates the main
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changes
which have taken place in
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Paradise
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Island
over the last year and present.

It
is observed
that
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before
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Island
was more green. To be more exact palm
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tres
were in the south side and west and east
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sides
of
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Paradise
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Island
.
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Furthermore
in the north-east side of
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Island
was natural spring. And opposite of that was scientific research station which
is located
in the south-west side.
Besides
that not
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big
beach was out of
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island
which was near to the sea.
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Moreover
was pier and boat for visiting.

According to the map
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now
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Paradis
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Island
has become more urbanize.
For example
, in the central side of map open restaurant
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wwas
build
also
BBQ area locate near that.
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Furthermore
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cafe
was beside the natural spring.
Also
was significant
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changes
in the
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centr
of
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island
. Foe instance, swimming pool and housing facility have built to visitors of
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Paradise
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Island
.
Besides
that
instead
of pier has built pier for cruise ship.

Overall
,
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Paradise
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Island
was more urbanize and modern than last year.
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Island
has become modern with housing and relaxing facilities.
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IELTS academic map Paradise Island past and present

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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