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The maps show the center of a small town Islip and after development.

The maps show the center of a small town Islip and after development. m3k68

The plans illustrate the center of a small city (Islip) that has gone through some changes. Overall, it is clear that this part of Islip has gone through radical alterations more significantly in the center of this region, as it was developed and converted into a massive commercial and residential area. First, as can be seen from these maps, on the western side of this area there used to be the main road which is expanded to a dual carriageway and created a circle design to facilitate transportation to various parts of this town. Also, in the north of this region, there was countryside which destructed for the expansion of the road. Besides, in the middle part of these plans, there were several shops by the main road among them, as all of them were removed with exception of the shops, which were located on the south of the main road which remained intact, while the main road converted into pedestrians only. Moreover, all shops were removed, yet a bus station, a shopping center, a car park, and new housing were erected. In the bottom right-hand corner there used to be a large park which diminished in size, due to expansion of the road. In the south of this region, there were some scattered housing which they separate into two parts two housings, and with new housing being constructed. Finally, there used to be a house in the bottom left-hand corner which expanded in size.

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small
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Islip
) that has gone through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
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Islip
 has gone through radical alterations more significantly
 in the center of this region, as it was developed
 and converted into a massive commercial and residential area.

First
, as can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from these maps, on the western side of this area there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 which is expanded
 to a dual carriageway and created a circle design to facilitate transportation to various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
parts
 of this town. Also
, in the north of this region, there was countryside which destructed for the expansion of the road.

Besides
, in the middle You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
part
 of these plans, there were several shops by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 among them, as all of them were removed
 with The usual collocation for "exception" in this context is "to" not "of". Did you mean "exception to"?exception to
exception of
 the shops, which were located
 on the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 which remained intact, while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 converted into pedestrians This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Moreover
, all shops were removed
, yet
 a bus station, a shopping center, a car park, and new housing were erected
. In the bottom right-hand corner there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be a large park which diminished in size, due to expansion of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. In the south of this region, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 scattered housing which they separate into two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorchunkanysharesectionfactor
parts
 two housings, and with new housing being constructed
. Finally
, there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in the bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand corner which expanded in size. 