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Many people think is not useful to study history but think is beneficial. Discuss both views give ur opinion

Many people think is not useful to study history but think is beneficial. Discuss both views give ur opinion lqRB9
People have different views about the impact of reading history related records. Although many people think that is not advantageous to study history, I believe that it is fruitful as we get knowledge of past happening. To begin with, . There are many reasons why Individuals might think that it previous studies have not benefits to us. The main reason is that people in bygone days were extremely superstitious and believed in ghost kind of things also, if mirror was broken suddenly they. Felt that u happening will definitely happend in up coming days. In addition there social evils. Like dowry system in which people had gave all the equipment which are needed. In a new house. So because of it pressure on girls family will increased. For fulfilling the demands of brooms family. , But this system is decking day by day. On other hand I believe that many things can be learned from past. Firstly, history is related to culcutre so by reading previous records people can get knowledge about tradition, customs that were used in the past, now that are gone. By historical books Individual aware about important historical events that are not mentioned in books. It is the fact that history repeats itself so it is really useful to read it, and not do the silmilar mistakes again that our ancestors did. To conclude, although by reading previous history book people may become superstitious but, I still. Believe that individuals will get vast knowledge about past.
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IELTS academic Many people think is not useful to study history but think is beneficial. Discuss both views give ur opinion

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