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The line graph given displays UK air pollutants in millions of tones from three main sources from 1990 to 2005.

The line graph given displays UK air pollutants in millions of tones from three main sources from 1990 to 2005. VPYA6
The line graph given displays UK air pollutants in millions of tones from three main sources from 1990 to 2005. Overall, the consumption of industry air pollutantspollutant and household air pollutant sources have decreased. In 1990, the proportion of industry air pollutants in the United Kingdom accounted for the highest share at almost 6 million tonnes while the number of transport and households air pollutantspollutant were equal at 1 million tonnes. In 2005, both industry and home air pollutants decreased from 5. 9 million tonnes to 3 million tonnes and from 1 million tonnes to 0 tonnes.
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in
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of tones from three main sources from 1990 to 2005.

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, the consumption of industry
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and household
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air
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sources have decreased.

In 1990, the proportion of industry
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air
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pollutants
in the United Kingdom accounted for the highest share at almost 6
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tonnes while the number of transport and households
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air
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pollutantspollutant
were equal at 1
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million
tonnes.

In 2005, both industry and home
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air
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pollutants
decreased from 5. 9
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million
tonnes to 3
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tonnes and from 1
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tonnes to 0 tonnes.
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IELTS academic The line graph given displays UK air pollutants in millions of tones from three main sources from 1990 to 2005.

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