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Line graph illustrating the ratio of cotton and wheet

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The given line graph reveals ratio of manufactured agrecultural goods in Tashkent region from 1998 to 2015. Overall it is obvious from the first glance at the graph that wheel increased sharply while cotton decreased significantly. Initially, in between 1998 and 2010 years cotton showed thehighest quantity. However, when it comes to 2015, cotton descended intensely. Till 2005 wheel demonsdemonstrated lower rate than cotton. But for 2010 and 2015 years wheet had jumped to the first place as 5000 tons
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line graph reveals ratio of manufactured
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agrecultural
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goods
in Tashkent region from 1998 to 2015.
Overall
it is obvious from the
first
glance at the graph that wheel increased
sharply
while cotton decreased
significantly
.

Initially
, in between 1998 and 2010 years cotton
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showed
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thehighest
quantity.
However
, when it
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comes
to 2015, cotton descended
intensely
. Till 2005 wheel
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demonsdemonstrated
lower rate than cotton.
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But
for 2010 and 2015 years
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wheet
had jumped to the
first
place as 5000
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IELTS academic Line graph illustrating the ratio of cotton and wheet

Academic
  American English
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