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The first two charts demonstrate the number of kilometres that a person travels by car and by alternative transport per year in some European countries. The last chart illustrates the amount of time that a person spends travelling per day in the same countries. From the information, we can see that the highest car use is in Denmark, whereas the lowest - in Germany and Spain. The inhabitants of Denmark also have the highest use of alternative transport, and those of the United Kingdom – the lowest. People in Denmark travel slightly more than 3000 kilometres per year that is twice as high as the EU average. When it comes to the commuting time, people in the United Kingdom spend approximately 47 hours a day travelling, which is greater than in any other country. In Italy and Denmark, on the contrary, people spend significantly less time travelling each day, despite the fact that the use of transport is higher than in the United Kingdom.

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