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Line graph show paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood produced in Uk from 1980 to 2000

Line graph show paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood produced in Uk from 1980 to 2000 0Em1Q

The line graph illustrates the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood were manufactured in England in 1989 and 2000. Overall, there was a dramatic rise in paper and packaging production in the UK, especially in the latter half of the period, while the opposite trend can be seen in the figures for sawn-wood and those for wood pulp fluctuated slightly. Additionally, the amount of paper and packaging material produced in the UK had by far the highest figures throughout the years. About 230 million tonnes of paper and packaging manufactured in England in 1980, with a slightly increase to 250 million tonnes in 1990. Conversely, a opposite trend was seen in the figures for saw-wood and wood-pulp manufacture, which declined to 150 million tonnes in the first 10 years. From 1990 to 2000, the amount of paper and packaging material made in UK continue to increase, reaching the highest point of 350 million tonnes. By contrast, the figure for sawn-wood kept dropping to 125 million tonnes, while wood-pulp witnessed a small recover to 160 million tonnes by the end of period.

The line graph illustrates the amount of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood were manufactured
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