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Energy type consumption in 1980 and 2010 in the USA

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The line graph shows, how the consumption of different fuel types chanGed between 1980 and 2010 in the USA. This report from 2008, also provides a projection until 2030, about how many quadrillion units will be needed. The most needed fuels in the past also in our future are petrol and oil. This had a twofold depression in 1985 and in 1995, but soon after it started growing significantly. The coal and the natural gas had been a really similar increasing trend that started at 15 and 20 quadrillion units, and finished at around 25 quadrillion units. The least consumed fuel types were nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy. While the nuclear power had a slightly increased pattern, the others mainly had been fluctuatING at around 5 quadrillion units. In the future, the consumption of petrol, oil and coal will be growing regardLesSly, while the other five will be flattening out. From the provided information, it clearly stands out that the old fashioned fuel types will keep their dominance in the future as well as they did in the past. However, the more environmentally friendly ones will not change.
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The most needed
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at 15 and 20 quadrillion
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, and finished at around 25 quadrillion
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. The least consumed
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types were nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower energy. While the nuclear power had a
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increased pattern, the others
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fluctuatING
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. In the future, the consumption of petrol, oil and coal will be growing
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regardLesSly
, while the other five will be flattening out.

From the provided information, it
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old fashioned
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types will
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their dominance in the future
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IELTS academic Energy type consumption in 1980 and 2010 in the USA

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